What do you think of my poem?

Hi. I love your narrative poem, it's a stabbed in the heart. This is a sad reality , some people forget to show mercy towards others especially the homeless and the needy, some forgot where they came from. You painted a sad picture words of those who lives on the streets , and the things they do to survived. we are not perfect, this could have had happens to you, others or my self. Very powerful message and I know it hit a lot's of home. Thank you for sharing.